0793 名無しさん@お腹いっぱい。 2019/02/06 00:58:09
(×-3)I agree with the idea that university students do a part time job.
Firstly, they can make friends with those who do the same part time job.
I think university students tend to be familiar with only their classmates, so (×-3)it is
interesting for them (×-3)to make friends with people who are in different (×-3)positions through part time jobs and to (×-2)talk with their friends.
Secondly, I like (×-2]money.
Therefore(×-2), it is good for university students to do a part time job.(2/20)
1 ID:GZOBS4Ho0(1/2)
俺は優しいからね。大学生がアルバイトすることに賛成かどうかについて書いたのだと解釈して、その上で20点満点で採点してやったが2/20
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